I lost her... - 每日一句英语

浏览：1582008-05-07 08:14 来自韩现龙 :

This is the story of myself,which happend not long ago.

3 month ago,she gave me a birthday cake on my birthday. From then on,I became like her a little and told her my feelings.

Maybe I made a mistake at the very start, maybe she doesn't like me at all...no matter what the reason is , I lost her finally..

She is a good girl. May she be happy.

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1周前 WilsonWu :

Congratulations, you are free!

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1周前 韩现龙 :

@WilsonWu
.....
i lost myself

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1周前 music000 :

It's not very bad losing her, you should told yourself: I'm lucky enough, just 3 months!
If you stayed with her for 5 years, and then, she left you, what's your felling? I supposed you 'll kill yourself !
I lost her too...
Forget about it, it's a new beginning!

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1周前 yonbin :

waste not, want not

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1周前 棕熊 :

drama ain't gonna do you any good. Live on

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1周前 WilsonWu :

@韩现龙
Don't worry about loss love, the flowers full of world.

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1周前 alisx :

haha I like it

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1周前 kun.zhang :

冒昧地给楼主修改一下错误.^_^
This is my story .(既然后面有时间,这里就不必再去写,以免显得有点臃肿)

3 month ago,she gave(brought) me a cake on my birthday. From then on,I fell in love with her(become好象后面没有接动词的用法,多是形容词做表语) and told her my feelings (later).

Maybe I made a mistake at(from) the very start, or(两句话之间要加连词的) maybe she didn't (唯一的时态错误)like me at all.No matter what the reason is , I lost her finally.

She is(You are) a nice(会不会比good更好呢?) girl. Wish her(you) happy(祝或希望应该这样).(在此第二人称也许比第三人称更合适,你觉得呢?)

楼主的写法一看就是典型的"Chinese English",maybe用得太多了.^_^
冒犯之处,还请包涵.

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1周前 石牌村夫 :

@kun.zhang
haha~~~

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1周前 kun.zhang :

@石牌村夫

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1周前 韩现龙 :

@kun.zhang

i havent learnt english for a long time,grammer and so many words has escaped my memory
and i just wanna express my feeling in this post.

anyhow,thank u so much!

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